Fast: Usain Bolt
An anthem of atoms
In a song of seconds
Calling out a chorus
Move, beyond muscles
Move, beyond reason
Move, beyond belief
Show me effort come round the bend
Then leave me at beginning's end
And allow me to wonder again
Being without perception
Being without limits
Being without question
This movement pivots
From one space to another
To this I say- I’ve seen the other
An anthem of atoms
In a song of seconds
Calling out a chorus
Move, beyond muscles
Move, beyond reason
Move, beyond belief
Show me effort come round the bend
Then leave me at beginning's end
And allow me to wonder again
Being without perception
Being without limits
Being without question
This movement pivots
From one space to another
To this I say- I’ve seen the other
i liked the pace on this one.Your syntax kept moving faster, and faster which had a nice rhythm to it. Then the last line slowed it all down and brought the whole thing together. Bravo.very nice!
ReplyDelete-Meagan Hawkins